Question

如今網絡已經對人們產生了很大影響，對中學生影響尤其之深。有人認為網絡的利大于弊，有人認為網絡的弊大于利。請以“Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”為題，用英語寫一篇文章，結合實際情況談談你的看法。

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Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from the Internet in our everyday life We can read news, watch films, keep in touch with our relatives, make friends, or play games to get relaxed on the Internet.
But every coin has two sides. The Internet also has bad effects on people, especially on teenagers. Things such as violence and cheating, often appear on the Internet seriously polluting their hearts and soul. Consequently, children will gradually lose interest in their studies.
Now,it's high time the government took effective measures. Some websites that disobey the rules should be made public and closed up. As students, we should protect ourselves by keeping on guard against the bad effects of the Internet. I'm sure we will have a better online environment soon so that the Internet can serve us better

試題分析：本篇書面表達是學生們非常熟悉的話題，對此學生都有親身體會和感受，所以不會無話可說。但是在表達時要注意文章的三個要點，即網絡的益處、壞處和自己的觀點看法，對這些要點不要有所遺漏。在謀篇布局上，可以針對這三方面使用三個段落來分別進行介紹，這樣會使文章有條理性，層次感。在時態選擇上可以使用一般現在時。此外在寫作時還要注意運用恰當的連接詞以使文章行文連貫，內容緊湊。
【亮點說明】文章采用三段式結構。第一段介紹網絡給人們帶來的好處；第二段介紹網絡的壞處；最后一段提出了自己的觀點看法。這種段落安排使文章結構分明，層次清晰，給人一目了然的感覺。文中There is no doubt that we have benefited….. But every coin has two sides.和it's high time the government took effective measures.三個經典的句型不僅起到承上啟下、連接語篇的作用，而且也顯示了作者對語言較高的靈活運用能力。此外，benefit 、consequently、effective等高級詞匯的使用也提升了作文的檔次。