Question

英語是同學們非常熟悉的學科。請你寫一篇文章，內容如下：
1.闡述學英語的必要性和重要性。
2.你能采取哪些措施提高英語成績。
注意：1. 詞數不少于100個；
2. 可適當發揮想象，增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 注意書寫。切勿照抄！
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Answer 1

Learning English is really a must! Let's take a look around us: the latest information around the world is written in or translated in English. English is one of the most important required subjects for the university and high school entrance exams.
Frankly, my English is not good. But I have to improve my English to pass the college entrance examination. As for me , I would force myself to memorize at least new words every day because a large vocabulary is essential in learning English well. Second, I would review some grammar rules every week, which helps me make fewer mistakes in writing English. Third, I'd like to read short articles and then write an English composition every other day.
I hope in this way I can realize my dream.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：要求1.闡述學英語的必要性和重要性。2.你能采取哪些措施提高英語成績。題目只是給出了提綱，具體內容要考生充實，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】范文要點全面，句式多變： English is one of the most important required subjects for the university and high school entrance exams. 這句話里面有過去分詞做定語， I would force myself to memorize at least new words every day because a large vocabulary is essential in learning English well.這句話有原因狀語從句，I would review some grammar rules every week, which helps me make fewer mistakes in writing English. 這句話是非限制性定語從句，還有范文中還有As for me , Second, Third,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。