Question

假定你是李華, 將去英國某學校短期學習, 被安排住在Smith先生家。請你寫封短信與其取得聯系并詢問以下情況：

1. 住宿條件；                    2. 膳食安排；             3. 交通情況。

注意： 1. 詞數100左右；        2. 可以適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫；

   3. 開頭語己為你寫好。

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m Li Hua from China, writing to ask about my stay with your family.    ______________              

___________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                  Yours,

              Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m Li Hua from China, writing to ask about my stay with your family.

First, I’d like to express my thanks for your kindness of having me. To better prepare for my life in Britain, I’d like to know if I’ll have a room for myself and if there is a computer I can use. I plan to have lunch at school, and it would be great if I could join you for breakfast and supper . Finally, could you tell me how far your place is from the school？Is it within walking distance or do I need to take a bus？

 I’m so excited about my visit to the UK. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

                                                         Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

解析:

本文要開門見山，首先點明主旨�？梢詰�用一些比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。文章句式精煉。用熟悉的句型、短語去表達。語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用要注意，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調和吸引注意的目的。