Dear Sir,
I’m a student of Senior 1. I am writing to ask you for some advice.
Since last week, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board in the school. They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. Besides, they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.
However, I have my own thoughts. If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. I really don’t know how to deal with the disagreement between us. Can you give me your advice?
Yours,
Li Ming
試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達. 平時除了加強詞匯積累,寫作聯系以外,還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。寫作時注意準確運用時態,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
【亮點說明】范文結構清晰,語言流暢,多用詞組和句型:make full use of充分利用,deal with處理, They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. 這句話用了it做形式主語, they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.這句話用了it做形式賓語, If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. 這句話用了省略句,At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. 這句話用了賓語從句。還有范文還使用了Besides讓文章更加連貫。