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當前，“酒后駕車”（drinking and driving）成了人們熱議的話題。請你根據以下提示對“酒后駕車”談談個人看法：

1．“酒后駕車”的危害。如：引發交通事故，造成交通阻塞，構成生命危險，

造成財產損失等。

2．你的建議。

注意：1．詞數100詞左右；   2．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Possible version:

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.

As is known to us all, drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even death. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.

I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drinking and driving can be things of past.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認真閱讀題目。當前，“酒后駕車”（drinking and driving）成了人們熱議的話題。請你根據以下提示對“酒后駕車”談談個人看法：1．“酒后駕車”的危害。如：引發交通事故，造成交通阻塞，構成生命危險，造成財產損失等。

2．你的建議�？芍�需要用一般現在時來寫。需要寫的內容已經給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談談自己的看法和建議。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意題目要求100字左右，寫的字數不要太多，也不能太少。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。