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如今，中學生的學習時間長，壓力大。上周我校學生對如何減壓放松進行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓放松的方法。請以How to Get Relaxed為題，根據下列信息寫一篇短文。

注意： (1)短文必須包括以下要點，并談談自己的看法；(2)詞數90左右，文章題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

How to Get Relaxed

Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed．

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. Some students thought we could get relaxed by communicating with parents and friends. And we could also go to the movies and go sightseeing to relax ourselves. Other students said they would like to have sports or listen to music to get relaxed. In my opinion, relaxing is important. When we are stressed out, we can’t study well. So we need to relax ourselves. We can do sports, play computer games or listen to music when we are under too much pressure. We can go shopping or take vacations, too. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，介紹了減壓的方法。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Some students thought…；Other students said…；When we are…；We can…等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要敘述減壓的好處。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭對如何減壓放松進行了討論，接下來是學生討論的減壓的方法，最后指出減壓后的好處，生活和學習都變好了。此處communicate with， would like to do sth， stress out，take vacations, in this way等這些詞組的運用和時間狀語從句When we are stressed out的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：話題作文。