Question

李華的哥哥在MH370失聯飛機中遇難，到現在一直還很傷心，總是一個人呆在房間，不和別人說話, 請你以王強的名義寫一封信給他，給他一些建議，鼓勵他振作起來。

要求：1．必須用上所有提示詞，可適當發揮；

2．詞數要求：60～80。開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

提示詞: talk with, get help from, take exercise, relax yourself, smile at life

Dear Li Hua, June 10th , 2014

I'm sorry to hear that your brother was in the flight MH370. _________________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours, Wang Qiang

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua, June 10th , 2014

I'm sorry to hear that your brother was in the flight MH370. When I knew that you lost your brother, I felt very sad. I know you still your brother, but it is useless. I think you shouldn’t stay in your room by yourself all the time. You should learn how to deal with sadness and relax yourself. For example, you can talk with your friends or teachers. Maybe you can get help from them. You'd better go out to take exercise or go to the movies with your friends. Take good care of yourself and smile at life!

Best wishes!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求以王強的名義寫一封信給李華，首先就李華的哥哥在MH370失聯飛機中遇難表示遺憾，然后給他一些建議，鼓勵他振作起來。注意建議的句式的應用。像You should，You'd better，you can，you shouldn’t等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當。在提出建議時用到了多個句式，如You should，You'd better，you can，you shouldn’t等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 使句式應用時不僵化。

考點：話題作文。