Question

假如你是李明，請你用英語向校長寫一篇80個詞左右的建議信。信中不能出現真實的班名和姓名。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next, I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現在時態進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:be glad to很高興做某事；talk about談論……；thanks for謝謝……等。序數詞first，second及聯系as，and等的使用使得本文邏輯清楚，上下文聯系緊密。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。
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