Question

1．校團委正舉行"暢想未來"的征文活動，請根據提示，以"My ideal school life"為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文

現在	未來
至少寫兩點現在的情況	1．多彩的校園生活（課外活動…）
	2．多樣的學習方式（網上學習…）
	3．和諧的人際交往（交友互助…）
	4．豐富的校外活動（做志愿者…）

要求：
1．所寫內容必須包括表格格中所有的館息，并作進為的發揮；
2．開頭及結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
3．不得出現真實的人們、校名、地名等相關信息．
My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 9．___________________________________________________________
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I hope ___________________________________________________________________________
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This is my ideal school life．I hope my dream will come true some day．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful我認為我的理想中的學校生活是有意義的多彩的．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

【高分句型二】
I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．我想要加入我感興趣的組織．
which作為關系詞的定語從句，修飾organizations．

解答 My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 9．I have too much homework every day and I don't have time for after-school activities．I think my school life is terrible．（現在）
Everyone has their own ideal school．I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful【高分句型一】．I'm very happy to study in the school．
We have five classes every day．I like all the lessons，because the lessons are very interesting．And we can choose our favorite lessons to learn．At noon，we have an hour's rest time．During the rest time，we can chat with classmates．
I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful．We can play many ball games after school every day．There are many organizations and clubs in our school．I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．【高分句型二】I would like to join many clubs，too．Of course，if you want to live in the school，you can do it．Most of the students like staying in school，because the school is very comfortable．
    Doing homework is part of the school life，but the work is not much，and very easy．We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher．Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind．If you have a problem，you can ask the teacher and classmates，they will help you．During my holidays，I want to be volunteer to help others in need．（未來）
This is my ideal school life．I hope my dream will come true some day．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來．動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮．根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．