Question

16．今年我國首次將高考作弊列入刑事處罰，稱為史上最嚴高考．此事引起社會廣泛關注．作為一名中學生，請你根據以下提示，就"學生考試作弊"這一話題，談談自己的看法．

作弊行為	攜帶紙條或電子產品
作弊原因	努力不夠，想考好；…
你的觀點	…

要求：
1．詞數80-100；開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數．
2．文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其它相關信息，否則不予評分．
3．參考詞匯：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考試作弊 electronic products 電子產品 micro-earphones 微型耳機 competing environment競爭環境
It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students are too lazy to work hard．
句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"結構，這句話意為：一些學生太懶了而不努力學習．
高分句型二：
In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．
句中使用短語有："in order to do sth  為了做某事"、"say No to…拒絕…"．這句話意為：為了營造公平的競爭環境，我們應該對考試作弊說不．

解答 It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others'answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．（作弊現象）
There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．【高分句型一】They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．（作弊的原因）
In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．【高分句型二】（我的觀點）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．