Question

書面表達 。（15分）

假如Tom是你最好的朋友，但是他最近身體不適，原因是他養成了非常不健康的生活習慣，比如：不愛吃蔬菜水果，不愛吃早餐；晚睡晚起；不愛鍛煉身體等，請你根據以上內容寫一封信為他提出合理的建議。（首尾已給出）

Dear Tom,

I feel sorry that you are sick these days. ________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Lily

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

I feel sorry that you are sick these days. Let me tell you something about how to keep healthy. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. And you had better have breakfast every day. You should get up early and go to bed early. It is important for you to exercise every day. You need keep drinking milk, because it is good for your health. I hope this can help you and you will be healthier.

Yours sincerely,

Lily

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一封信給湯姆，提出保持健康的合理建議。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Let me......; You should......; It is important for you ......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭對湯姆生病表示遺憾，接下來給他提出一些關于健康的建議，最后希望湯姆身體更健康。此處用了句型It is important for you to do sth ，短語tell sb about sth, keep healthy ,keep doing,be good for等這些詞組也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。