Question

今年我省出臺了系列推進素質教育的新政，其中對學生的作息時間做了嚴格規定。學生課外時間增多了，他們都在干些什么？他們的負擔減輕了嗎？下面是English Online雜志社就這些問題對某市部分初中生進行問卷調查的結果。請根據該調查結果寫一份80～100詞的調查報告，并簡單談談你的意見和看法。文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數。

How many students	60%	5%	15%	20%
What do they do	Study, read books or do homework	Watch TV	Play computer games	Do sports or play outdoors

English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time. Here is the result.

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Answer 1

English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time. Here is the result.

After school, 60% of them study and read books or do homework at home. 5% watch TV and 15% play computer games. 20% do sports or play outdoors with classmates or friends.

Things are much better than before, but still about 60% of students are busy studying in their free time. Study is not the only important things for children. Playing is important for them, too. By playing, children can keep healthy, and can learn things that they can’t get from books. So children need more time to do different kinds of activities.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們根據該調查結果寫一份80～100詞的調查報告，并簡單談談我們的意見和看法。在題目中給了我們這篇報告的寫作提綱：一、60%的學生業余時間會學習、看書或做作業；5%的學生會看電視；15%的學生會玩電腦游戲；20%的學生會進行體育活動或者戶外玩。二、談下我們自己的看法。提綱雖然已經列好，但是很多內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據表格所列出的調查結果，詳細準確地進行了講述，并表述自己的看法。層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內容完成得也不錯。如Study is not the only important things for children.等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Things are much better than before, but still about 60% of students are busy studying in their free time.等。

考點：提綱類作文。