Question

假設你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny向你詢問有關如何保持健康的問題。請你給她發一個電子郵件，提一些建議。內容要點如下：
注意合理飲食，要多吃魚、肉、豆類等，特別是新鮮蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多甜食。
注意鍛煉身體，勞逸結合，多參加體育鍛煉。
3、保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個小時。
3、保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個小時。
注意：1、詞數100左右。2、注意行文連貫。3、開頭與結尾已經寫好。
Dear Jenny,
How nice it is to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jenny,
How nice it is to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Here is my advice.
First of all,  try to develop a balanced diet. You had better eat more fish, meat, beans and so on, especially fresh vegetables and fruit so that you can take in enough nutrients. Don’t eat too much food with sugar because it is bad for your health and can make you put on weight. 
Secondly, you ought to take enough exercise and learn to combine work with relaxation. Take part in sports as often as possible and you will find you’re much healthier.
My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day. Remember not to stay up too late.
Yours,
Li Hua   

試題分析：這是提綱式作文，關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】范文中有一些常用的詞組和詞組： take in 吸收，理解，put on weight.增加體重，Take part in參加， as often as possible盡可能經常， stay up too late 熬夜，You had better eat more fish, meat, beans and so on, especially fresh vegetables and fruit so that you can take in enough nutrients.這句話用了結果狀語從句，My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day.這句話用了表語從句， 還有文章使用了First of all, Secondly這樣的關聯詞，使文章更加連貫。