Question

假設你是李華，你的美國老師Miss Morgan要求你們明天下午去聽一個美國歷史的講座。你因故不能參加。請你根據以下要點，寫一封短信向Miss Morgan請假。
內容要點：
*表示歉意  
*理由：去機場接人  
*詢問：是否有錄音，以便補聽講座
注意：
1. 詞數：100左右  
2. 可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫
Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry                                                                                 
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                   
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇提綱類書面表達。第一步：審題。分析題目和提綱可知，這封書信的體裁應該是議論文。論點是“家長用金錢，旅游等承諾鼓勵孩子努力學習是不確當的”，陳述要點并說明理由。因文章需要發表自己的意見，故使用第一人稱。第二步：構思。文章應該按照“總——分——總”的結構分為三段�？忌�在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態。不能根據材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如so … that …，be able to， attend the lecture，promise to do, be interested in，if so，a great deal；還運用句型if、what引導的賓語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：and，if so等等。