不唯一
September 20, 2009 Sunny
About fifty American students came to visit our school today.
We gathered at the school gate at 8 to give them a warm welcome. Then we had a get-together in the reading room in our library our headmaster told them something about our school. And then we talked with each other and exchanged gifts. From nine thirty we showed them around our school. They visited our teaching building, the lab building, the factory run by our school, and the swimming pool. A friendly basketball game started on the sports ground at ten thirty. It wasn`t until twelve that all American students left our school.
In the afternoon my classmates and I went to some shops. We chose and bought some books and tapes.
I was very busy the whole day but meanwhile I have been in high spirits today.
試題分析:格式是日記最重要的一部分,最好要格式齊全,包括日期、星期、天氣、正文這四個要素。一般,寫日期是寫在抬頭第一行的,日期寫在星期之前,都在正文前,右上角寫當天天氣。最后,就是時態的問題,通常都用一般過去式,因為日記是記錄已經發生的事。但是,考生應該注意的是,如果你的日記是描寫風景等等的,是不用過去式的,要用一般現在時,也可以用一般將來式。
點評:其實英文日記和漢語日記一樣,都是用來記敘一天中所發生的有意義的事情或對將來的打算等等。文體仍可分為記事、議論、描寫及抒情等。記事型是用英語記述當天自己生活學習中發生的事情。議論型是對生活中的某一事情或情況現象談自己的看法,發表議論。描寫型或抒情型,則是對某人物或事物的特征做細致的描述,或針對某事物抒發自己的感情。本文是記錄一天的活動情況,所以屬于記事性的文章,用過去式就行。