Question

最近某高中擬開展以“校園拒絕零食”為主題的活動。假如你是該校學生會主席，請你以學生會的名義，參考下面的內容提示，給全校學生寫一封倡議書。
內容提示：1．描述吃零食的現象；
2．闡述吃零食的影響；
3．提出合理化的建議。
注意：   1．詞數100左右，開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)。
2．參考詞匯：snacks零食；phenomenon現象。
Dear fellow students，
There is a serious phenomenon in our school．________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear fellow students.
There is a serious phenomenon in our school. We find many students will crowd in the school store to buy snacks after each class. Some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks is a bad habit and is also a waste of money. In addition，most snacks are unhealthy fond，for they contain too much fat and sugar. Eating snacks improperly may lead to fatness and illness. What is worse，some students throw the wrappers everywhere，which pollutes our campus.
Dear fellow students，we shouldn’t act like kids any more. We high school students should develop god habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are essential for us. Let’s form good eating habits and say no to snacks!

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點評：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。