Question

作為一名高一學生，名叫李華，你對部分同學迷于玩電子游戲的現象很著急，便向一家英文報社編輯部寄了一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲機的壞處。
要點：
1. 電子游戲在學生中很流行，有些學生整天玩電子游戲，忘記了做作業，甚至逃學。
2. 玩電子游戲要花很多錢，有的經常向父母要錢，有的經常向同學借，有的甚至偷同學的錢。
3. 過分玩電子游戲使店主受益，對同學的學習和健康不利。
4. 希望政府采取措施加以制止。
注意: 1. 詞數100左右;
2. 信件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計人總詞數;
3. 可以適當增節細節，以使行文連貫.
4. 提示詞：電子游戲video games；逃學play truant
Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students. _____________________________________
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Yours ever,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students. Some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay a great deal of money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for money, borrow and even steal money from their classmates.
Too much video games playing needs time, money and energy. The others benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.
I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.
Yours ever,
LiHua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。