Question

If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with hardships.
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內容必須結合校園生活中的一個事例；
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
⑤詞數120左右。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.
When I entered Senior 3, I found myself faced with difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As a consequence I began to feel frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, telling me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.
As the saying goes, where there’s a will, there’s a way. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.

試題分析：話題作文要求考生根據英文提示，結合生活中的一個事例，根據所給的英語提示，寫一篇話題作文。這種“開放式”的論述文的命題形式給考生很大的自由發揮空間，對寫作的布局謀篇提出了較高要求，要求考生既要會發表觀點認識，又要會進行描寫敘述。這種寫作命題有利于立體考查學生的語言知識、創新思維能力和價值觀，具有較強的選拔功能。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如Equipped with confidence, make a difference還運用了It was at this moment that強調句型; which引導的非限制性定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：As the saying goes，As a consequence等等。
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