Question

閱讀下面的一則通訊稿，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Recently many advisers have called for reforms of the English language testing system to make it more effective in developing actual language ability.
"Currently, the English testing system in China puts too much pressure on students to get high marks and ignores the development of their comprehensive（綜合的）language abilities," they said.
"Some changes in the evaluation procedures of English examinations are necessary for the sound development of the national English education system," others added.
[寫作內容]
假設你班最近要進行一次英語主題班會，就上述文章中談及的話題進行討論，請你準備一篇發言稿，以下是發言稿的內容（開頭與結尾已經寫好）：
1. 以約30個詞概括和分析上述話題的主要內容；
2. 以約120個詞就這一話題發表自己的看法，并包括如下要點：
(1) 你是否贊成通訊稿中人們的觀點。
(2) 至少呈現三條理由來支撐自己的觀點。
(3) 對于“How to develop comprehensive language ability”，提出你認為最重要的一條途徑。
[寫作要求]
1.作文中可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接抄用原文中的句子;
2.文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
Dear classmates,
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Personally, ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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As to the development of comprehensive language abilities, __________________________
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That’s all. I appreciate your attention.

Answer 1

Dear classmates,
Recently, the topic of whether English should be tested in a reformed way has been heatedly discussed. Many believe the current evaluation procedures hinder students’ comprehensive abilities and therefore argue for a reform.
Personally, I am against this point of view. There are numerous reasons why I think so, but today I would only explore some of them. Firstly, I don’t think our comprehensive abilities are hindered. To my knowledge, many of my classmates are good at all the four skills of English. Moreover, the current testing system is nothing but the fairest way for students to get selected for college study. Admittedly, there is pressure nowadays. But who can guarantee a new testing method will spare us from pressure?
As to the development of comprehensive language abilities, I believe the only solution is we students practice more, either listening and reading or speaking and writing. Only in this way can we learn English in an effective way. That’s all. I appreciate your attention.（152 words）

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】文章簡潔的總結了所給材料，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫，文章使用了高級詞匯和短語：hinder，argue for ，To my knowledge, nothing but ，spare sb. from sth，還有復雜的句式：Recently, the topic of whether English should be tested in a reformed way has been heatedly discussed. 這句話用了賓語從句， There are numerous reasons why I think so,這句話用了定語從句， Only in this way can we learn English in an effective way.這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章還使用了 Firstly, Moreover,這樣的關聯詞使文章更加連貫。