Question

你們學校最近做了一項調查,調查的主題是”你寒假會去做兼職掙錢嗎?”下面是調查結果:

結 果	原 因
89%選擇不去	父母不允許 學習太忙,沒時間 不知道自己能做什么工作
11%選擇去	學以致用 積累社會經驗 減輕父母的壓力

請你就此用英文寫一篇文章.
注意: 1.詞數100左右;
2.可適當拓展內容以使行文連貫。
開頭已經給出，但不計入總數。
Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
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Answer 1

Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do. 11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through work, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents’ pressure..

試題分析：這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作，它以表格的形式提出了論點（寒假兼職的優點和缺點）和論據，還以文字提示形式提出了話題（寒假是否會去做兼職賺錢）及需要考生自由發揮的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發表個人的見解。本文的重點是表格中兩種方式的優，缺點，根據題目的特點，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。根據內容，盡管討論已經發生，但它是就一般的暑假假期計劃而進行的討論，沒有特定的時間界定，因而考生應以一般現在時和一般將來時為主。相當一部分考生用一般過去時進行論述，這會失掉較多的分數。從題目所給的開頭可知應用第一人稱來寫。
【亮點說明】文章結構層次清楚，觀點明確，語言表達準確，多用詞組和句式： Allow sb. to do “允許某人做”，. they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. 這句話用了so…that…句型， they are not sure what job they can do. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. 這兩句話用了賓語從句還有范文還使用了 First, Second, Third, In addition,這些關聯詞使文章更加連貫。
考點:考查議論文寫作