請以“A good state of mind is the base of success.”為題，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一
篇100-120個詞的短文。
????????????? 要求：1）記述事情的經過，內容必須結合生活中的一個事例。
????????????? ????? 2）簡要說明好的心態對于獲得成功的重要性以及從中得到的啟示。
????????????? ????? 3) 文中不得透露個人姓名及班級名稱。
A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success
A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success
Life is complicated. We can’t avoid anything annoying or stressful. Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.
An experience never fades from my memory. With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class. Seeing this, my teacher came to my help. With her aid, I adjusted myself and felt confident again. In the meantime, a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons. In the end, I managed to pass the exam.
It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam. A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.
【解析】
試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】范文主題明確，夾敘夾議，在語言上用了一些常見的短語In the meantime同時, In the end最后, go over復習，out of control失去控制， keep in mind 記住，句式上也是富有變化：Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.這句話用了主語從句和表語從句， With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class.這句話用了with復合結構和現在分詞做結果狀語， Seeing this, my teacher came to my help.這句話用了現在分詞做伴隨狀語， It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam.這句話用了強調句。 A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. 這句話用了表語從句，Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.這句話用了讓步狀語從句和倒裝句。
考點：考查開放式書面表達
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注意：
1．詞數：110左右；
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Your choice(s) |
very important→ not important |
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