Question

目前，校園安全事故時有發生。請用英語寫一篇100～120詞的短文，簡單描述一下校園安全問題并提出改進的措施。

Answer 1

One possible student version:
Nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety, including bicycle theft, traffic accidents and students’ getting injured in school. It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families. How to protect us students?
There are several ways. First, we should raise our safety awareness---to take care of ourselves in school. Second, traffic regulations must be observed. Besides, we should be more careful in taking physical exercise. Last but not least, we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students. We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight.
All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment.

試題分析：考查開放性短文寫作。本文的話題是校園安全。首先要描述校園安全的現狀，最近一段時間校園安全問題頻現，引起廣泛關注。分析原因方面可以從社會，學校家長學生對校園安全重視不夠，措施不得力，實施不到位。改進的措施可以從加強教育，更新設備等方面進一步展開。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。