Question

最近你班舉行班會討論“家庭條件是否影響孩子的學習”。同學們看法不一，觀點如下表。請你用英語給校英文報寫一篇短文介紹討論的結果，并發表看法。

觀點一	經濟拮據的家庭不能滿足孩子生活學習的需要
觀點二	優越的家庭條件能給孩子帶來許多便利
觀點三	優越的家庭條件不利于孩子獨立能力的培養
你的觀點	……

注意：1.文章開頭已給，不計入總詞數；
2．詞數120左右。
Recently we had a class meeting to discuss “Whether the family conditions can
influence students’ study?”_______________________________________________

Answer 1

Recently we had a class meeting to discuss “Whether the family conditions can influence students’ study?” Different students have different attitudes towards it.Some students put it that if a student live in the bad conditions he can’t get what he wants.Some students think that those who enjoy the favorable family conditions can easily get convenience if necessary.There is no doubt that it will be helpful to their study and future life.However, others hold the view that it is against the development of independent living skills.
As far as I am concerned, I think high school students are no longer children and therefore they should learn how to live on their own experience hardships and get mentally prepared for their future  life .Only in this way can they become useful to society and enjoy a colorful life in the future.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
點評：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。