Question

書面表達（20分）
請根據以下提示寫一篇英語短文：一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳，用英文寫一篇介紹，主要內容包括：
1.地點：距離白山入口處500米。
2.房間及其價格：單人間，共20間：100元/天；雙人間，共15間，150元/天；熱水淋浴
3.餐飲：有餐廳（提供中餐和西餐）；有咖啡廳（提供茶，咖啡等）
4.游泳池：全天免費開放
5.歡迎預定
注意：詞數不少于80詞，開頭已經寫好；可以適當增加細節；使行文連貫
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Baishi Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishi Mounatian. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves 3 meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool which is open all day and free of charge.
All are welcome!

試題分析：本文的寫作首先按照題目的順序對賓館的位置進行介紹stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishi Mounatian.然后對房間、價格情況進行介紹It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers.在句式上可以多用介詞來連詞成句，又表達自然貼切，再對餐飲和游泳池的情況進行介紹，重點突出免費We also have a swimming pool which is open all day and free of charge.最后呼吁大家提前預定并表示歡迎You are advised to book in advance. All are welcome!
點評：應用文是比較容易寫的文體，平時學生的練習也比較多。寫的過程中注意避免使用中式英文，對于表達內容層次時需要使用平時積累的層次關系的短語，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩步的提升。