Question

假設你是學生會文體委員，請根據下面圖表，用英語寫一則關于春游的通知。

參加者	活動內容	集合時間及地點	注意事項
高中一、二年級的學生	1. 去博物館看人與自然的展覽； 2. 參觀泉山植物園.	1. 4月25日上午乘校車前往。早晨7點集合，7：20開車； 2. 學校大門前。	1. 參觀展覽時保持安靜；并認真記筆記，準備回來后討論； 2. 在山頂野餐，要自帶午餐和欣水； 3. 參加者在本周四前到學生會報名。

 

Answer 1

Notice
The students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two go out for a visit on April 25. We’ll first go to the museum to see an exhibition on Human and Nature. When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.
Our school bus will take us there. The school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:00 am.
Those who want to take part in the activity should enter your names at the Students’ Union before Thursday.

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